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Constructive criticism is welcome. I'm just a beginner, and this is a piece of rushed work. i hope you all enjoy it as much as i enjoyed writing it
"Children are the most sensitive to this Magic, and as children, we were all exposed to this." - Because I keep on thinking back to when I was younger, and had more of an imagination than I do now (though it's still in there somewhere ;) ). So this sentence is very true. :D
What was your inspiration?
Well done! It's very true that God wants us to love our neighbor's (family/friends/strangers) as ourselves. Imagination is a great gift, which God gave to us as kids, then as we grow up, we mature, but still have that kid-like look on life. ;) The same look that God had when creating the world!
Again, great job on this composition! God bless!