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The rhyming! I love how you created a story through a poem. :)
Not really. You did a really good job!
Keep up the great work! Rhyming words in stories tend to capture people's attention more than anything else, so that was a great idea for this story!
Great job on this composition! I love how the monster and the birds became friends! It shows that you can be friends with anyone, as long as you love them for who they are inside, and not what they look like. :) Keep up the good work! God bless!