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"She hates herself for it, but she's so confused she can't tell the difference from right and wrong." - Because that's probably how a lot of people feel without Jesus in their life.
Hopelessness. But will there be hope later on? :)
Are you going to continue with this?
This paragraph has perked my interest. How did she "lose anchor"? Will someone help her? Please write more!
Keep up the good work! God bless!