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Message to Readers
I LOOOOVE it when you give me peer reviews! I always work really hard on my pieces, and I always adore knowing what you think!
"It only took a moment for him to through me into the computer." - Because it's so bizarre and unreal, and it's a very interesting read!
A bit of laughter, un-realism, and interest!
What was your inspiration?
Excellent job on this composition! I love it to bits! :D You are going to continue with this, I hope! Will the author get out of the computer in time to save her story? Or will the villain win? Honestly, though, the first part to this story, before (and while) the author got a snack is totally me! I'll get into writing a story, and my adrenaline will be racing, my attention set, then reality hits. ;) I also get that way when I'm reading really interesting books.
Again. Great job! Keep up the good work! God bless!