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Steady yet fast. Each stanza seemed to pick up a little tempo.
The poet uses metaphor to compare herself to computer commands.
Burn the cliches, proofread the dreams. It boils down so much of the writing process to just to simple things.
This poem made a strong impression on me, an impression that made me reflect on how I receive new ideas from others. I was left with a feeling of empathy at the end of the poem, understanding the struggle to be original.
This might be the most moving piece I've read on WTW. Your metaphor to a computer provided the structure for you to explore the topic of originality, and your brief but powerful style of writing had me enthralled. Great work!