Received 1818677971734315

Bailee

Australia

You may be wondering what makes me different from you or the person in the corner? Well not a lot really, I write on here, on Wattpad, and singing is my life. I'm striving to one day perform on Broadway... hopefully. I honestly just love feedback!

Message from Writer

Hey everyone! I would really appreciate some constructive criticism. I struggle a lot with grammar. I would love to gain feedback about how I could improve this... thanks! From a girl you don't know!

First Sentences

August 4, 2015

1. Some stories are meant to be told, others simply not, but my story can never be told, my story can only tell itself. 

2. She quickly blossomed like a flower, but flower's don't even keep their beauty.

3. Grey clouds painted the sky as creeking signs swung miserably in their place. The pub merely full with the bell ringing to signall a new comer, waiting for warmth to set at their side. 

4. Gertrude Nickle-Gobber is the unfortunate name that I was given to clearly never save my life.

5. "You mean nothing to me!" She screamed using every strength she had, as the other girl sobbed her plea's. 

Print

See History
  • August 4, 2015 - 6:44pm (Now Viewing)

Login or Signup to provide a comment.