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The humor! Because it adds so much to the story, and I love it! :D
No. You did an excellent job in all the details!
Keep up the good work! I love the humor as it adds a lot to the over-all story, and the characters.
Great job on this short-story! My favorite character is definitely Lizzie! Her excitement in meeting the queen, and over her new dress is so addictive! So childlike! :) Again, well done! Keep up the good work! God bless!