Life is unpredictable... Eat dessert first.
Hey guys, just need a little feedback mostly on the flow of the story (whether it sounds alright), the plot (whether it makes sense), and the rhyme scheme and meter (whether it sounds as it should, like a poem). Thanks so much for taking the time to read and I'd really, really appreciate if you dropped me a quick review. I'm looking desparately for constructive criticism.
Written By: Timshel26
June 7, 2017