The Inspiration

United States

STARTED WRITING WHEN I WAS 9 YEARS
WRITING OPENED ME UP IN LIFE AND LOVE
let life take u and rise above all
I am 13 now
''Difficult roads often lead u to beautiful destinations''

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i am a young writer. yes i might not have good grammar but to understand the writing is better

The Light We Can Not See

June 5, 2017

FREE WRITING

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Flowers bloom
the sun rises
to the  sky 
where none can reach
as i walk, children play 
teens love
sky is blue 
Stars are unseen 
not until night
when darkness falls
i go deep deep into the black hole
caged
closed
unnoticed
for gold shines but none to see 
or is it diamond that giltters
a path that is a fork road 
should i go on a path of righteous
or shame
for i am with the crowd
do i stand out?
do i fade?
in the dust 
with wind 
the trees are filled with colors
but none stand out with the others
they are all the same 
or is it?
clouds shapes 
cars ride 
faith pass
i die 
in a outcome that shows no resulted 
to fear the sun 
but powers grow near darkness
the door is open 
but none go out 
when the door shuts 
none gets out
caged with no reels
pride with no walk
time changes 
life stays
 heart  burn 
fire coolers
in the woods 
i see nothing 
in the park 
nothing 
anything or anywhere 
nothing 
my heat beats 
i can walk but with astick guiding me 
for i am bilnd 
The light we can not see

 
 

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  • The Inspiration

    Thank you for the feed back Elizabeth


    over 3 years ago
  • Deleted User

    The first person "I" is usually capitalized. For example, "I go deep deep into the black hole" .
    Punctuation and complete sentences also improve writing quality.


    over 3 years ago