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Message to Readers
Tell me which version is your favorite please this is the third installment to the Jasmine quartet. Only the last one needs to be read last, the others can be read in any order.
"I looked over, and there, written on the front, was a simple name. My name. Evelyn." - You left the story off with this mystery sentence. Who exactly is Evelyn? Why did her mother leave her there? I need to know more. :)
More! I need more! Mystery, sadness, yet love.
What was your inspiration?
Excellent description! Love the mystery in this piece. :)