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Message to Readers
The first paragraph was created while listening to Dear Theodosia from the Hamilton soundtrack. It is about my dead daughter from a past life. The second paragraph was written during the Nightcore version of Titanium, and is a past version of me ending a fight with my brother who became a monster. The last paragraph was based on the feelings I See Fire by Ed Sheeran gave me, and it's about someone climbing a mountain to see a rare and breathtaking phase of the moon called a sliver moon. Hope you enjoy!
The entire first paragraph. I can't narrow it down to just one or two sentences. I like it because it tells me what is missing. Something that should be there but isn't.
Sadness, yet some kind of beauty.
Why did you have the mother kill her brother?
I must not have read the first part to this story. Because it's called: "Music Writings 2". Well done with the description of this piece! I could see it all very clearly. Such a sad, touching composition. well done! God bless!