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It is sad, yet full of unanswered questions.
The describing words. Letting me see the entire house, and letting me think what Hannah is thinking.
I need more background behind this story. Or have this as a flash-back?
Excellent job! Are you going to continue with this story? I hope you do! :) Keep up the good work! God bless!