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'You left, Jasmine.' - This almost broke my heart. Superb job with making this story your reader's.
Sadness, almost hopelessness, curiosity. Why did she leave?
What was your inspiration?
Very well done! You captured such emotion in this short composition! Truly captivating! And thanks for completing this series. :) Great descriptions as well! Each scene as clear as the other.
Again, extremely well done! God bless!