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Please tell me where I would need to improve in my phrasing and grammar and the like. I appreciate any feedback. :)
The highlighted sentence. Because it's so true. Many people all over the world want to idolize a famous celebrity.
Sadness, and passion to tell those people that the only person they need to follow after is Jesus Christ. :)
What was your inspiration?
Very well done! It reminds me to keep my eyes on Jesus. The only One who I should fashion myself after. :) God bless!