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Please tell me where I would need to improve in my phrasing and grammar and the like. I appreciate any feedback. :)
"they mimic so often that they cannot find themselves in all of the clutter, in all the shards and pieces of the others."
After reading this I feel faintly embarrassed because I am a bit of a mockingbird. I also feel disheartened and desolate, because what you say is true.
Would you consider yourself a mockingbird? Who would you mock?
Good piece. Interesting and catchy and faintly dark.