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Message to Readers
Is this satisfying? Please be honest and tell me what you had expected.
The highlighted part at the end. Because it's true! People are so much more important than good jobs, or 'leaving a mark'.
Peace, contentment. Jasmine finally realized what was most important.
What were you thinking as you wrote this conclusion?
Very well done! I almost cried with Jasmine. :) All the questions are answered. Now I need to read the entire series again. ;) Keep up the good work! God bless!