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Hard to say. There were a lot of good stuff. Nice usage of literary devices! I love it! XD
*glances at adult* hmmm -_-
What else do children do to adults? (especially them crazy kids who make their parents hair to grey early)
Very nice! Love your usage of literary devices! Don't be afraid of
' ; ' and learn how to use them well. You don't need a comma at the end of every line in a poem. Just go with the flow! :) Good work!