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"When you whisper to each other the walls become paper,'" This is a touching way to show that children understand, that they are smarter than adults think they are. I think the relationship between parents and children is really illustrated here.
A sense of shared understanding. That every child is powerful. That they aren't dumb puppies. That they matter, we matter.
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I really loved this piece.