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'he is protecting the homeland' - Because that's why we have our military. They are protecting us because they love America.
Pride for our military.
Do you have relatives in the military who gave you inspiration for this piece?
I like how you put in patriotic quotes from hymns and other poems to get your message across.
Two of my brothers are US Marines, so I really like the first paragraph. ;)
Keep up the good work! God bless!