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A hero dying for the country that he loves, and being honored by fellow soldiers and officers.
The emotion. I can appreciate this piece very much because I have two brothers currently serving in the military.
"Buck was never coming back."
"The knock, the thing I have always been afraid would come."
Sadness, pride, honor.
All of the above mentioned words. Memories from the past, coming together with the present to form a likeness of what Buck was like. A hero, proud to fight (and even die) for his country.
Sadness, heartbreak, yet pride and thankfulness. I'm thankful to all those who have served, or who are serving in the military!
Excellent job on this piece! I like how you put in memories of Buck, and connected it to his time in the military.
Keep up the good work! Well done! God bless!