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"A touch is an echo, which, like whispers, leave gentle tendrils of memory caressing the mind." This line is so true, yet you have to think about it in complete wonder for a moment.
Wonder. Amazement. Realization.
How did you write this so beautifully?!
This is a beautiful piece, Grace.
As I read each sentence I had to stop and think about it; it was so beautiful!
Keep writing pieces like this; you are AMAZING!