Peer Review by Ash (United States)

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Love

By: Kyra Young


PROMPT: Open Prompt

Love hurts

That's what everyone says

Love doesn't hurt

It's who you fall for

It's those people who help with love

Without them wrong people would fall in love

I thank all the heart breakers

I found my true love 

 



Message to Readers

Any feedback is fine.


Peer Review

It's a short little love poem with a twist (yes, I'm aware I think they're overrated and cliches, just read it: it's not even ten lines).


You manage to keep things brief yet profound.


:)


Reviewer Comments

A lot of people end up elongating the piece just to add more words, not realizing they're actually weighing down their piece. Your piece may be short, but it doesn't feel like you left anything out. Nice job!