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Mmm. I particularly like the line "Is this what love should feel like?" because it provides the necessary contrast to this poem, like sweet and salty.
I remember the girl I'm still experiencing radiation poisoning from. The last stanza drops me into a happy state of timelessness, my mind having assumed the position of you, waiting in timelessness for the One to find me.
Well of course my curiosity is piqued about, well, you and Mr. Atomic and your future. Perhaps write a poem later about how well you are recuperating?
The fourth stanza is my favorite because it reflects on other opposite loves, summed up as 'unsaid goodbyes.' How eternally haunting those are, don't you agree?
The last two lines of the poem seeped into my brain like a well seasoned brine. Honestly, I'n finding it really hard to put my feelings into words.
Hopeful hopelessness. Fiery endurance.
Hope Mr. Atomic finds you!