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Two lines stood out to me actually. 1. "I wanted to be unstuck" struck me, and it's hard to explain why exactly. Basically, being stuck isn't something I would have ever connected to anxiety, but after reading this I can't think of anything better to describe that feeling. 2. "The safety of silence" because most people take comfort in noise, but after having an episode of anxiety like described, silence does feel safe.
I feel like I've just had an anxiety attack, and been brought out of it by someone I trust, truthfully. Reading this, for me, meant living it for like 20 seconds.
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This piece is spot on. I love the repetition in it, the word choice, everything about it. I have no criticism.