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The best advice I have ever received, hope it helps you too:)
The implications of the decision, and the courage it must've taken to stay by this decision resonated with me. I, myself, have also considered about whether going to college is something I want to do after my GCE A Levels this year - or would I rather do something else first?
Sometimes we mix up what we want with what others expect of us - and perhaps this is especially true for children who admire what their parents think, and fear to disappoint them. It is not an easy decision to make, and I salute you for being so brave!
Timeless and empowering advice. :") I identify with the last line to a great extent, and feel that yes, it is definitely important to love the person you are, and be the person you want to be.
Nonetheless, I feel that the idea can be further explored to exemplify how to "Make Your Own Expectations" because I feel that making expectations which are too lofty may instead lead to disappointment (resulting in dejection with many doses!).
A suggestion would be to consider how you would want to present this piece - would it be an essay, or from a scene such as the one in your piece where you faced the doubts about not going to college before extrapolating it? Perhaps having a clearer flow can help emphasise the message you want to leave the readers with. Apart from a few spelling errors, this is a piece with lots of potential with regards to where you wish to take it.
Love the advice and hope you find happiness no matter the decision you choose to go with! :D