Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.
Message to Readers
This is simply a rough draft. I will submit this to the MYSTERY CONTEST when I have the time!
The highlighted lines stands out to me the most because it makes the story a lot more dramatic.
Awe and amazement because this story is amazing.
What inspired you to write this?
This is so good! I would definitely read this series(if it was a series). Keep writing mysteries.