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"like sweet milk swirled into bitter coffee" I love the image that you use.
so much empathy, because I have been told that I speak good english in my passport country, and I know that so many others share the experience of skin-based isolation, and I'm lucky that I haven't experienced this more.
Are these real questions and answers or poetic constructions? (it doesn't matter...but I'm just curious) And why did you choose to show how culture and looks interact?
This is really lovely. I think you may want to consider the format a little (e.g. why do you answer the first three questions but not the ones afterwards) and think about transitions (how do you segway into the painting part of the poem) but overall, I really enjoyed reading this.