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Message to Readers
-- Fiona Kelly
"And most of all my parents wouldn't be divorced." This line stands out to me, because all my life I've been in the middle of a family feud, and just wish my family were together and happy. I've never known my father, and have been in foster care, so I guess I have more than one parent. *shrugs*
So at first, I was feeling sorry for the writer, but when I read the chorus, I smiled because it was actually good!
What (or who) inspired you to write this?
Never stop writing!