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Message to Readers
Chapter Four! Introductions will be coming as soon as I can be bothered to do so. I think a goal of year is reasonable, actually.... that might be pushing it.
"She is so annoyingly dramatic!" Because isn't everyone? You're either too dramatic in expressing your happiness, or too dramatic in acting like you aren't happy; either way: annoyingly dramatic!
I'm smiling so hard my face muscles hurt. I loved this piece! So emotion= *Insert happy emoji*
What grade are you in (or were you in), when you wrote this?
Never stop writing! This was a really fun read, and I look forward to seeing more people 'in your grade.'