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"A city of a thousand cages trailing from the clouds, shivering in the breeze, ever on the move as the heavens and skies drift over the hushed earth."
It's very easy to picture. You lead the reader to seeing exactly what you envisioned.
Whimsical, amicable, loving (in the caring and supportive manner)
I'd like to know a lot more about the inhabitants and the various species and their customs.
Nice job! I'd really like to see you write something with this place.