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I have many, but probably the one I loved the most was, "make sure you remember to floss daily, rinse your mouth with honey & graffiti the lead into the side of your hand". The imagery in this entire poem is so vivid and real.
This poem is so accurate of what anxiety feels like, and the structure of it amplifies that. The staccato-like writing in this piece stays true to anxiety/anxiety attacks and doesn't romanticize it like a lot of pieces of literature, tv shows and movies do. This poem makes me feel every panic-filled thought, the expansive paranoia, and constant thoughts rushing through the head of the protagonist- I emphasize with them and that's what makes this piece so powerful.
How did you come up with such a brilliant poem?
This is brilliant because of the structure, the diversity of language and ideas and most of all, the powerful message behind this poem is beautifully executed.