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description and content and a little advice on vocabulary usage.
I really admired the subject matter. Blair's use of vocabulary and descriptive words to describe the setting and mood was amazing.
I related to having a family member, not necessarily my dad, being abusive.
Blair balanced scene and reflection well in my opinion. Although she could've added a scene to describe exactly how close her and her sister were. In the last paragraph, she could've added a time when the Adventure Girlz experience helped to overcome a situation.
I was satisfied with the ending.