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"Do the flowers sway for the wind
or does the wind blow for the flowers?"
Although it is a simple imagery, I can imagine a field of flowers swaying gently in the wind, which is very soothing to me. It also introduces a personality to natural elements.
Lovely ideas and it certainly made me think in a different manner. I would like to see other types of questions as well (not only questions which challenge different perspectives) to lend your poem diversity but otherwise, I enjoyed reading this poem!
Wishing you all the best with your writing endeavours! Keep up the good work :-)