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Because this story is written from a cats POV, there is a little spark added. A little immaturity and silliness from the animal. I like it.
If you continued the story, I'd like to hear more about how the cat and girl grow together and get into a little mischief, some silly fun.
This story warmed my heart, and made me chuckle when the cat mentions the girl and Him. This is unique, and fun. I really liked it. Keep writing.