The structure of the written piece; does everything flow in a logical way and does it make sense?
Written By: Kayla
July 9, 2015
THE MAIN EVENT/TENSION CONFLICT (still need fleshing out)
After middle school I really didnt want to play high school basketball, so I just played basketball whenever I could in my spare time. I still used to hang with the players on the team but I just felt I wasnt ready to play on a high school level, so I avoided joining the team. After a few weeks went by I decided to talk to the head coach at the time about joining the team.
THE EMOTION I FELT (still need fleshing out)
THE ACTION I TOOK (still need fleshing out)
THE IMPACT OF THE ACTION (still need fleshing out)
THE LESSON I'VE LEARNED (still need fleshing out)
The outcome of my whole situation is that I have gained knowledge on how to express my feelings and showing what I have a passion for and pursuing what I would really like to do in the future, and from then I have seen that I could only grow and get better. I have learned how to trust my teammates because they motivated and encouraged me to push myself to be better.