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When they comment on how 'that was a nice discussion.' You get a really vivid image of the character: mainly, they're a jerk. The narrator is quick-tempered, smug, and condescending.
When you first outright state that the narrator and the other girl were made to mirror each other, I knew I had to keep reading: you did a good job subtly introducing the concept in the previous paragraph before bringing it to the forefront.
If you continued this piece, I'd really like to see the polar opposite have some more positive traits. It'd be neat to see how you'd work that in.
I really like how you ran with the mirrored image concept. After all, that's basically what your polar opposite is anyways. Nice job!