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I love lots of feedback. Thanks for the awesome comments and I hope to write something else soon.
I like the line, "How could you miss it?" It shows how the main character isn't particularly kind to those who are mean to her, she's rather bright, and she doesn't think of herself of highly intelligent.
I rolled my eyes, going along with my work - This character doesn't really care if people are being jerks to her or not: she's task oriented. When she starts something, she finishes it, no matter what.
Just some small grammar and spelling issues. As for plot and characters, something a lot harder to fix, you did great. I love the polar opposite you created!