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I love the line I have highlighted because I think it is so honest and intense.
A little bittersweet. I am glad I am not the only one with a list of jobs I think I want to have but I clear idea of which one I actually want to do.
What do you honk you want to be?
This is a beautifuly well written piece that has a truth to it that I think a lot of people can connect with and I know I can. I want to do a lot of different things but I don't know which one would ha a good fit because I haven't figured myself out yet.