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Identity

By: cxnnawayy


PROMPT: Beyond Reason

Is this me or is it
a picture of my imagination?

Is life real or are we just
living inside a movie for strangers?

Is society really a factor of life or
is it a regime set on making us pay 
for their mistakes?

Can I love who I want to or
will that make me a 
horrible daughter? 


Peer Review

THE LAST ONE OMG!!!


I'm bisexual, and one of my biggest fears, despite having supportive parents, was being seen as a horrible daughter for loving more than just cisgender men. That line speaks to the fear I dealt with for so long.


Reviewer Comments

I feel myself living through the poem.