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Any kind of review is great! I just want to keep improving my writing :)
First line. I like how you start listing all the things that the city isn't made of before finally saying what it is made of.
Eerie, mysterious, creepy, very much incorporating all aspects of the word 'dead.'
Perhaps the founder. Why would skeletons make houses out of bone?
You repeat the word "dust" a lot. Use a synonym. Besides that, I love the city! You gave very detailed descriptions and I appreciate that.