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The sheer boldness and bravery in saying "I am just a speck of dust." It's a powerful statement and is hard to say about yourself! You definitely have a lot of self-awareness about who you are and what you consider to be your place in the world.
Definitely the sense of being self-centered and struggling to overcome that very natural tendency.
A scene would definitely strengthen this piece. It's a bit short as is, and sort of loops around in a circle. Putting a scene in the middle would help us identify with who YOU are and how you came to this realization or how it affects your daily life, and that would really help solidify your piece and ground it in real life.
I think tying the personal aspect of this piece in at the end would make it very powerful... especially if you were able to reference a scene that you've described for us.
You've written a very courageous piece! Statements like these are not easy statements to make, and yet you boldly write them out. The piece certainly could use a bit of work -- expanding it out, incorporating a scene from your life, clearing up some confusing sentences and phrases -- but overall I applaud the work you've done on this piece.