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I really liked the opening sentence. It hooked me and drew me into the piece.
I enjoyed the line, "I am a speck of dust, nowhere near perfect." I could relate to this because I am a perfectionist, and this is a good reminder :)
This writing seemed to ramble a little bit, and it was confusing. I didn't understand where the author was going with it.
I was unsatisfied by the ending because I still had the same questions I found at the beginning of the story.
Try to put a bit of direction into your stories; have them take the reader on a journey.