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I like when you describe the flowers at the end of the piece. It's nice that you end your piece on a hopeful, beautiful note.
It's complicated. The city's depressing, old, and dying, but somehow it's also enduring, bustling, and beautiful.
I'd really like to see a story in this setting. You have a very complex setting and it would be nice to see how a resident of Olinda interacts with the city.
I enjoy the formatting you decided to use. Just a few errors here and there, but I want to definitely see you write a story with this setting in the future.