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Suri Purefoy

United States

Hey there! I love writing, reading, watching movies, smelling rain, cooking, babysitting, watching leaves turn colors in autumn, laughing, and hanging out with friends and family.
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This is a song I wrote a couple years back. Made no changes, so sorry if there's a lot of mess-ups and such. Feedback would be great!

Lone

July 3, 2015

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Did you ever say goodbye?

Did you ever see me cry?

When the tears fell down my face

You were nowhere near this place

When I called your name

There was pure claim

That you had left me

You left me

 

I smiled with you

I cried with you

But when you left

There was nothing

Loneliness

Shrouded me

You were nowhere

You left me

 

I had once been glee and glad

I had never been sad

We sang, danced and played

And laughed in the shade

I would smile when we talked

I would skip when we walked

But then you left me

You left me

 

I smiled with you

I cried with you

But when you left

There was nothing

Loneliness

Shrouded me

You were nowhere

You left me

 

You left me when you were needed most

You left me when I made a toast

to you

I cried and sulked

I pouted and moped

You never came to comfort me

You never, ever came

You were gone

You left me

I smiled with you

I cried with you

But when you left

There was nothing

Loneliness

Shrouded me

You were nowhere

You left me

 

I..smiled.. with you

I cried… with you

But.. when you..left

There was.. nothing

Loneliness

Shrouded me

You were nowhere

You left me

 

You were gone

Gone

You left me

You...left me…

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