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"The sound of a blood-chilling howl wrenched the girl from her peaceful slumber." This sentence shows a shift in the story; going from serene to dangerous.
I would love to know how it ends! Does the girl live? What caused the monsters to come after her? I would love to read a sequel to this.
What was your inspiration for this piece? It was very creative and enjoyable.
Please write a sequel. :)