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"As the gust seemed to grow, she wrapped her clothed arms around the tree limb, clinging to it for dear life. " The part of the line that caught my attention was clinging to it for dear life because it showed the urgency that the irl had and it just reinforced the idea of the girl trying to escape.
I feel mystical, which is a book thing. I feel like this is something that a science fiction author (i.e. J.K. Rowling) would write about.
What exactly did the flower do?
So what I got from this is that a wolf (he) is chasing the girl. (I hope that was what the story was about). That's a pretty simple storyline, but I liked the fact that you added so much detail to it. I felt as if I was the girl being chased and I was able to experience everything that she was experiencing. I think you did a great job with this piece.