Holly B


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What is out of place, confusing or sounds too rushed


August 5, 2022

Running and running, stumbling over invisible objects and panic continuing to grow. Bushes are everywhere we look and darkness stretches above us. I glance back to check on Eva, whose hand is holding mine in iron grip. Her eyes light up. "Mark! Look!" She calls, pulling me towards a hidden path. EXIT is written in big letters on a door and we burst through it back into the theme park. Collapsing to the ground and gasping for breath, I hug Eva tightly "We escaped!" I laugh between gasps. The Forbidden Maze is definetly not made for two 8-year olds


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