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Soeun | she,her

Reader(Isn't everybody one?XD) | Writer | Debater
Super into golfing and table tennis
Violinist | Pianist
I speak Korean, English, and French
Joined WtW in July 5th, 2022
If you want a review, just ask!

Message to Readers

Hi everyone! Here’s my go on the prompt! Enjoy!

Comets

August 6, 2022

The icy balls that fall from the sky
Treasured rocks that make them cry
Priceless treasure, more than a diamond
Fall from the sky, less than a second

Traveled for a million miles,
Traveled as the bright sun smiles,
Traveled through the harshest places,
Traveled through all the menaces,

I don’t get the fuss however,
To me it’s just a rock from wherever,
You can say it’s priceless from the core,
But the rock in my yard went through more

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14 Comments
  • Lunar0

    Re: Thanks for the compliments! And I'm not sure how many chapters I intend to write. A normal, professional author amount? I don't know if I'll be able to do that, but I intend to find out.


    1 day ago
  • WhoTalksLikeMe

    re: aww thanks :)
    Are you submitting anything?


    1 day ago
  • WhoTalksLikeMe

    re: Thank you!


    1 day ago
  • issa :p

    re: thank you so much!! this is also so beautiful you are an amazing writer!


    1 day ago
  • Wonder :)

    Beautiful! I love the rhyme and rhythm! The last lines are so creative and meaningful :)


    2 days ago
  • Roari

    This piece really is lovely and the rhyming in it is wonderful. Coming from a major space lover, you have definitely done it justice!

    Re: Thank you so much for your kind comment and for the warm welcome! And thank as well for the honest feedback :)


    2 days ago
  • Rain ʕ•ᴥ•`ʔ

    Re: You are most welcome m'lady. ;)


    2 days ago
  • Rain ʕ•ᴥ•`ʔ

    Beautiful, shooting at my heart m'lady. Just beautiful.
    Hehe, I believe a comet struck my heart when I read this simply beautiful piece. XD


    2 days ago
  • Galya

    Re: Your welcome! By the way, I do debate too! What speaker position are you? I'm third speaker.


    3 days ago
  • KanjiKat

    Hi Soeun, would it be alright if you reviewed my piece The River. It's been revised, so it'd be nice if you reviewed the new version. (I already got 8 reviews on the old one, which is a lot :) )


    3 days ago
  • ~stuck|in|my|head~

    Re: Thank you! I'm glad you liked my poem, that means a lot <3
    I'm sure your a great artist. Art is in the eye of the beholder, for instance my dad hates my pfp drawing Lol He thinks it's creepy :p ;)


    3 days ago
  • Galya

    Re: Thanks! Also, you said you can't rhyme. What are you talking about?, you're literally a rhyme master. My favorite book from The Lunar Chronicles is either Cinder or Winter. I love Winter but Cinder was relatable because I read it during the pandemic. (2020) You know, coronavirus and letumosis. Who's your favorite character? Mine is either Kai or Winter. Also, great job on the poem!


    3 days ago
  • Annie Locke (A.L.)

    Re: Thank you, Soeun! Why don't we call them equally great? ;D


    3 days ago
  • Annie Locke (A.L.)

    See! I said you'd make a peice greater than mine! I love this- so creative, as always!


    3 days ago