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I read the title and it said "Red Light" which caused me to think of cars. I despise cars and driving so I decided to read the story.
Throughout the whole story, it's never explicitly stated but it's pretty clear that this story is about driving and getting into a car accident because someone ran a red light.
I think the story wasn't confusing. It was easy to understand and the story was conveyed well.
I think your story stands out compared to other stories because of your style- using mainly people talking. I love stories like that. Also it brings up a good point too. Good job
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