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Hey, call me Dee!
I love swimming, sports, listening to music (TobyMac/NF) and hanging out with my awesome friends! And most of all I love Jesus!!

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When you See a Red Light. . . *PLEASE REVIEW* *EDITED VERSION*

August 6, 2022

"Ugh, a red light" I muttered under my breath, " I got no time for this foolishness!"

  "We have a 21 year old male in ICU with a decreased level of conciseness and a severe head injury,"
  "How's his breathing?"
  "Checking."
  "Breathing?
   "None"

                                         
  "Hey Jaron."
  "Hey, how do you know me and why do you look just like me, but older?"
  "I am you, and I'm here to warn you. When you see a red light, always stop!"
  "Hey, wait older me where'd you go?" 

  12 years later

  "Ugh, a red light" I muttered under my breath, "" I got no time for this foolishness!"


 
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11 Comments
  • V-Rose

    Reviewed!


    2 days ago
  • Extrasweet

    Hi Dee! I just submitted my review for this piece! Hope it helps!


    2 days ago
  • IfPagesCouldTalk

    Re; I'll try Dee, and she inst overly exuberant about it either.


    3 days ago
  • sweber55

    Re: Thank you so much I appreciate it! Love your pfp by the way ;) Love NF! I can't remember which one, but it might have been either "Can't believe I died" by Sik World or "When the drugs don't work" by Problematic.


    3 days ago
  • Davidoula Georgopoulou

    Lovely piece! Exciting plot:) How did you do it in just 99 words? Amazing!!!


    4 days ago
  • Extrasweet

    Hi, this is a great piece! Good luck on your first comp! I’ll make sure to review as soon as I can ;)


    4 days ago
  • WhoTalksLikeMe

    re: Hey! So, funny story...I already did!


    4 days ago
  • when_breaks_the_dawn_light

    Re: I will!


    4 days ago
  • V-Rose

    Re: I wil totally review it! It might take a day or two for me to get to it, but I'll do it soon! Also, if you'd like, to remind me, just shot me another comment! I have the memory of a... I forgot. ;) Anyway, in short, no problem, I will review it!


    5 days ago
  • mnesic writer

    Re: absolutely, I will review it :)


    5 days ago
  • Coolgirl (I will review ANYTHING!)

    Reviewing! :)


    6 days ago